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Here it is, my contribution to :iconemmagear:'s 12 Days of Squishmas!

I'd wanted to contribute in years past, but I was a little concerned about trying to write something on a deadline. Fortunately, I took the plunge this year and managed to finish up just in time.

This story is a follow-up to "Part of the Team" (fav.me/d74n7o9) and "Popular Girls" (fav.me/d9cgl25). I've really been enjoying exploring the different viewpoints of these three characters and having a ton of fun expanding on their lives, so I hope you all enjoy their most recent adventure, and don't expect it to be their last.
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Realmlord Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2016
Glooorious story :D I second the final comment little Mandy had. Best christmas evaar!

Brilliantly written, had me at the edge of my seat permanently. I love this story so much!

Thank you for taking the time to write it for us!
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wormee7 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2016
great story! interesting how Nikki and Kristen are both dominate, yet express it in opposite ways.

And my goddess those boots are amazing!
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Amarie-Tinuviel Featured By Owner Edited Feb 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You certainly are creative ^^
It was enjoyable to read the first part with shoe shopping. Nikky is quite easy for me to relate to in that situation. She is playfully dominant what sounds good to me if I was about to dominate someone my size ;) Teasing rather than hurting, but remaining in superior position. Kristen is quite harsh and I think I would rather protect you from her and keep you for myself instead of leaving you on her mercy, but that's probably what you like most ^^ Anyway part about shopping was really enjoyable and I would love to have such obedient slave as you to help me with choosing shoes ;) In real life I would probably be ashamed to act like that in public, but at home it would be good fun :P And I would certainly let you keep my used shoes, if you begged me nicely ;P;P;P
Regarding the part with beating Megan and her male friend, I don't like such brutality. Total domination is much more fun for me using mind control for instance. But that's just my point of view :)
Thank you very much for sharing ^^
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so delighted that you read this story and enjoyed it so much. Being that I only really know you from mostly your pictures and a few other things you've said in your comments and descriptions, it's very interesting to hear your thoughts and tastes, especially in the framework of a story of mine. As you mentioned, total domination is certainly what I enjoy most within my fantasies, but I feel like there's many ways to demonstrate and express that. In all honesty, even though I greatly enjoyed writing the more violent parts of the story, it was the whole scene in the shoe store that I keep fantasizing about as I was planning this story out. 

Hopefully someday you'll get to take a nice subservient boy or girl out shopping with you, maybe somewhere where you can be yourself and nobody you know will be there to make you uncomfortable. Being served in a shoe store is a spectacular experience that I highly recommend.

Thank you for reading and especially for commenting. Hopefully I'll have something new for you to enjoy soon!
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supersimpleman Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2016
Very well written! 
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BentoKitsune Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016
I've always loved your work, I can't believe I didn't have you watched when I switched to this new DA x.x Shame on me. Anyways, once again amazing work from you. Its pretty clear if your name is attached to it, it's going to be great.
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Such lovely praise. I'm glad to have you back, dear, though I didn't recognize you at first. I'll do my best to keep giving you reasons to keep your eyes on me, and your fantasies running wild.
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BentoKitsune Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2016
You do that very well >///>
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RamsusXIII Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
You're exceptionally good at what you do. But I thought these were supposed to be short stories. :P
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I'll only call them novels if they surpass a hundred pages. I only have one project that will for sure, and another that might.
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CrushedBoyWonder Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016
Finally got to read and comment on this. ffuUFUCKK goOD this may be one of your best pieces. The way you related being a sub with a footwear fetish was uncannily accurate, how u do that? Aren't you the opposite of sub how did you write this so well also jesus good hot sexy crush boot time
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Believe it or not, I only really discovered my dominant side in college. I grew up thinking I wanted to be dominated and controlled by someone; that I wanted to see a cruel, unstoppable giantess wreak havoc on the innocent and unprepared world around her.

Then, at some point, I realized that nobody was better at the things I wanted than I was. I started doing some roleplaying and domination stuff and finally felt like things were how they were meant to be. Still, it's useful to have that perspective from the past when I write, and I'm glad my efforts paid off for you.
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CrushedBoyWonder Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
ohhhhhh 
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Theophilous Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016
Hashtag Boots! Read and appreciated! Thx. 
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Boots boots boots.
I love boots.
Hooray, boots!

Glad you enjoyed. I don't think I've commented on your story yet, but Stompedy Pete sneaks into my mind rather often.
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PerspectiveShift Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015  Professional Writer
Had to read this on-and-off over about an hour due to company in the room - but hooooo boy... So very worth it.
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I enjoy the thought of your friends and family noticing a few beads of sweat forming on your brow as my story got you all flustered.

Glad you enjoyed, dear boy.
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PerspectiveShift Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2015  Professional Writer
Hehehe, more like the singular housemate; she's used to seeing the sweat-beats on my brow from time to time, but it's normally when I'm shifting heavy objects for her...

... I don't typically have that excuse when I'm sitting down reading.
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Tiny-Ink-Spot Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Really amazing story!

The writing style alone is in a class of it's own and the story was awesome.

Loved how each character was so well developed and had a clear personality they followed which is rare.

10/10 Would read again!
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
The most compelling part of a story, at least for me, is a well-developed character. When I start thinking about a story I want to write, it always begins with who the character is and what she gets out of the cruel and violent things she does.

I'm sure I'll write more about these girls at some point, and I'm glad you enjoyed their latest adventure.
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deathlordazrael Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015
Quite a piece, i dare say it's one of your best :)
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I know you've pretty much read them all, so I appreciate the high praise.
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deathlordazrael Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
T'is always a pleasure, your work is always a beautiful thing to read
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cjhell Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015
breathes hard whooooo damn and fav
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bertrugo Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015
I'm insanely biased in that I'm a fan of total addiction to someone else AND not a fan of gore&co,
but I still think this story was awesome(the first part, of course, being even more so!)
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't intend for the shoe store scene to get so involved, but I kept coming up with exciting ideas for it, so I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much even before we got to all the shrinking and such.
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SorenZer0 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015
Squad goals. :p (Lick) 
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zanderasgoth17 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015
Damn.... that was brutal. Can't help but really want to see the three girls get their just desserts, but I think we both know how we feel on that subject.

A good read though and I enjoyed the sheer brutality of it even if its not my thing.

(maybe I'll just make a suspiciously familiar trio of giantesses in ASH...)
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
They'd have so much fun in the Society. I'd actually quite enjoy seeing what you did with personalities like yours in your story's world.
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zanderasgoth17 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
I might just put them in. The next act is going to have a good many new Society people
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I do love the Society, so that news has me quite excited. When will I be getting my membership card?
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zanderasgoth17 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016
Its in the mail along with the welcome to the club captured Resistance member.
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely to hear! But... wait a minute, just one?
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zanderasgoth17 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2016
Sorry, only one per application. Shouldn't have signed up together.
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GiantessNyx Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015
You write about dominant female characters so well, which is one of the reasons why I enjoy your stories so much. I love their power-lust and cruelty, as well as how easily they destroy the lives of their shrunken victims. The part where Kristen taunts the tiny man with Megan’s remains…oh my, it made my heart skip a few beats. Absolutely marvelous story. :D
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MissKaneda Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Coming from one of my favorite authors, your praise delights me to no end. I'm also quite excited that you pointed out that particular moment, as it was something I went back and added to the story at the last moment. I was admittedly right up against my deadline for publication when I finished my first draft, and after going back through, I felt that there was just a little something missing from the crush scenes at the end.

Thank you for reading and for the feedback. Always lovely to hear from you.
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PerspectiveShift Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015  Professional Writer
It's a true thing you say; the day may come when I meet a woman in reality who is as relentlessly, un-apologetically dominant as the characters she writes. It's delicious to read about.
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